Say your opinion to my poems <3

I got one life  but i will gladly give it to you
I can't stand this pain when you arent here
I'm standing in the desert with tears in my eyes,
and waiting you
Please come here and save me from this heart pain,
because i can't hold it alot, and i know you will come
& you will end this cruel feeling with your hot kiss
you bring me to heaven again & alot of more
Thank you coz i have you
I will love you forever and i whant you so badly.

Here I am, positioned in front of you
with a red rose, with a word , with a wish, expression in my heart
Your eyes, your beautiful face, your smile
The angelic outlok you bring blinds me everytime.
I want enjoy this moment forever.
The way you stand close to me
Holding my hand, and looking in my eyes,
Your hot lips touching mine.
Suddenly, I feel your tears rolling down my face
Let me feel them with you  
Let me love you forever
and now, I begg you with watering eyes to let me hold your heart,
I promise I'll keep it safe with desire .
And I'll let you have mine, Why?
Because you're the only one who gives me wings, who makes me smile.

In he's beautiful eyes
i can se alot of hope,
and those eyes are impressive.
I worry alot about you , shoudn't I ?
I hope it not bothers you coz i
whanna be with you
my life it's so hard without you
please letme be happy with you
&letme be with you forever
because i didn't loved someone else like you.
I would sel my soul for you
or i would give my world to you,
In the mean time when you read this
make a wish, don't tell me
just wishper me with the wind
if it camed true .
Close your eyes & sleep in my arm
relaxe because i will protect you
when you will open your eyes
i will be here for you
because i can't leave you .

I bow down to my knees in front of you, & i just cry
Please listen to my words what i try to say :
I found myself lost forever in this world
sometimes i coudn't be happy & i was
many times disappointed in life.
But now i will never give up
I will never let you alone , i never gonna let you to be sad
I don't whant you to feel the sorrow only the endles fun
& feel you are the most important person in my life ,
feel my desires, my feelings what become stronger
in every second when you are with me .
Please never broke with me ,
Because i will fight for you
& i fight for my death if you are somebody's else lover
I will make you mine forever & i will never let you go
I love you forever but i will be with you forever!